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It is Christmas in the heart that puts Christmas in the air.
Big photography feature about Christmas, full of wonderful works and wise christmas quotations.
Happy holidays to you!
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 I'm not really a fan of this one. It's just too scattered for my liking. It sounds as though you were trying a bit too hard to keep the theme, but while doing that you lost it. I'm not sure if that makes any sense. I don't know, I'm just not as into this as I am with some of your other poetry.
-- The world moves much faster than any of us would like to believe; Breathe easy. it's okay. that's a fair critique.
I hope so, I'm always afraid I'm being harsh.
-- The world moves much faster than any of us would like to believe; Breathe easy. sometimes harsh is fair, but... honesty is always fair, harsh or not! don't worry about hurting my feelings, as i am my own worst critic (that damn commitee in my head-they are relentless and brutal!)
Oh, do I hear you on that one.
-- The world moves much faster than any of us would like to believe; Breathe easy. meaning, is it written from my own point of view? if yes, then, yes-entirely an experienced emotion wrapped up in those mellodramamtic little lines, like if my soul could vommit! that's what it would sound like! eeeewwwwwh.
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Critiques
1) Space between lines are very big
2) Selected font is very in very old computer style you could use fonts like some of this shown on my corection picture
2,1) If u use old english like this, text must be easy to read and reader must not die on this!
3) very strange format of sheet
4) why has this text so strange form?
5) free space is too much
6) u must leave space between text and edge, eyes need rest!
7) nice
see link your daviation with my corections image
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